Sunday, December 18, 2016

###oh, Feathered Friend Comments

Rating: 5.0

A bird sat high up, on a fragile branch,
Watching soldiers marching across his land.
A sombre fellow, dressed in black,
Who could not these moving figures, understand,
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Ernestine Northover
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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 March 2020

A masterfully crafted composition, dear Ma’am Ernestine.....10+++❤️

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Jazib Kamalvi 28 August 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Ernestine. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Georgios Venetopoulos 24 July 2017

Beautifully written, tightly put together and neat. It becomes a dramatic monologue but not a tragedy which is good. Bravo, Ernestine!

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