Thursday, June 4, 2015

Oh Drunken Sweet Wind! Just An Only Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

Perfumed silky hairs and black eyes,
Exposing symbols of youth on skies,
Oh! Lovely wet winds, keep it hidden,
I know for you it’s nothing forbidden,
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Khalida Bano Ali 20 July 2015

What a beautiful poem! ............................................10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 June 2015

Welcome the beauty of a charming face, Purified soul of the clouds with a grace, ....I welcome these sentences. Very nicely envisioned the whole poem I like most. ..... 10

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Crammed with creativity! Well done my friend!

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Valsa George 05 June 2015

'Let the clouds shower a pleasure and delight, ' Here the monsoon has started mildly as a pleasure and a delight!

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