Wednesday, June 7, 2023

Oh Devil, You Won't Escape My Wrath Comments

Rating: 4.9

Devil, oh Devil, I see you sneaking around
11 ways to curse you, I promise to astound
I'll turn your inferno to an icy wasteland
and strip you of all powers, you'll beg for a helping hand
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Rajan T Renganathan
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Juhaina Tumlu 08 June 2023

They live in dark and they don't fear at all. Better leave them on their own and carry on with our work.

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The powerful language of the poem is engaging and carries the reader with it. A verbal attack on all those try to vitiate peace, harmony and camaraderie, in any field.. good to read

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 June 2023

A fantastic write... appreciated

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 June 2023

Liked the opening lines and the closure lines. A well crafted and executed poem. Top Marks! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 June 2023

A powerful and incisive poem. Each and every line cuts like a knife. Wonderful poetic expressions embellished with great rhyme.

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David Wood 07 June 2023

The ups and downs of life can test anybody's patience.

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Poetic Sky 07 June 2023

There are many more Devils around. We all need to find some ways to punish them.

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Poetic Sky 07 June 2023

Wish I could do the same to my DEVIL, I'll bind you in a cage, with chains and locks so tight torture you with silence, and deprive you of light...

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