Monday, August 7, 2017

Oh Death Comments

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Oh death, you merciless master of the dark underground
Have you no conscious perimeter when you roll call?
Oh death, you heartless master of the great beyond
Does your job description involves making nice people fall?
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Ivan Brooks Sr
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Ivan Brooks 02 September 2017

Death is inevitable yet it; s role and function is not acceptable because we are often separated from those we love.. Why? A question you will never answer..silent master of the dark master...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 August 2017

Eternal nest is there near God where their souls will ride atop a beautiful golden horse. Death is a truth that allows a soul to renew. But death brings separation this gives pain. Still truth we all should accept. Amazing sharing is done here.10

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Ivan Brooks 02 September 2017

Thanks Mahakul

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Qiniso Mogale 07 August 2017

How long shall you cause us pains for your selfish gains! A great poem. You may like to read my poem Death Shall Die. Well penned.

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Ivan Brooks 02 September 2017

Thanks Qiniso

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Ivan Brooks Sr

Ivan Brooks Sr

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