! ! ! Oh Dear Immemorial! ! ! Comments

let God may bless you by your cravings and breath of smiles may lay on you... Really intence... very great that says you want this really badly How about read Edward Cullen from my poem list and give me a comment...

Oh dear immemorial Poetry. Your poem elevates the soul to touch the moon. I had a grade 10, up there in the moon, and you reached out to catch it. Bravo!

.....really a fine peice.......compact composition......love emitting truely.......10

A season full of soul searching done with gay abandon. Best wishes, arya

passion-ascension-redemption good rhyming -excellent glossary of words. ++10 as always regards anjali

Nice beautiful write by you.Very impressive words usage!