Monday, January 2, 2017

Oh Dear God (हे भगवान) Comments

Rating: 5.0

मैं ठीक हूँ।
मैं ठीक हूँ।
हे भगवान,
आप मुझे जल्द ही सुनते हैं।
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Chandrasekhar Kushwaha 26 October 2020

A beautiful prayer is rising from mind and reaching up to God. This poem is very nice and interesting. We feel essence of your penning.

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 August 2019

Beautiful. It is not easy for a grown up to write in the language of a child, but this piece has done it beautifully. Prayerful.

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Dogma Daniman 27 February 2019

Declaring fineness of God with great trust and vision motivates many. This poem is lovely. Thank you for sharing this devotional master piece.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 September 2018

A wonderful spiritual write. So simple and clear but very meaningful. A deep affirmation of faith. Beautifully crafted prayer.10+++

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Siddartha Montik 11 January 2017

thank you for sharing Sir. Remembering alimighty with such. respect! ! microbe.! !

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M Asim Nehal 02 January 2017

Both the versions are equally fantastic. Kya baat hai...... After reading your wonderful poem few things came to my mind, as under: हम सब चकित है इस दुनिया को देख कर कैसे बानी है और किसने बनाया इसे हम जानते हैं कि यह घर नहीं अपना फिर भी जाने क्यों दिल लगाए बैठे हैं

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