मैं ठीक हूँ।
मैं ठीक हूँ।
हे भगवान,
आप मुझे जल्द ही सुनते हैं।
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Beautiful. It is not easy for a grown up to write in the language of a child, but this piece has done it beautifully. Prayerful.
Declaring fineness of God with great trust and vision motivates many. This poem is lovely. Thank you for sharing this devotional master piece.
A wonderful spiritual write. So simple and clear but very meaningful. A deep affirmation of faith. Beautifully crafted prayer.10+++
thank you for sharing Sir. Remembering alimighty with such. respect! ! microbe.! !
Both the versions are equally fantastic. Kya baat hai...... After reading your wonderful poem few things came to my mind, as under: हम सब चकित है इस दुनिया को देख कर कैसे बानी है और किसने बनाया इसे हम जानते हैं कि यह घर नहीं अपना फिर भी जाने क्यों दिल लगाए बैठे हैं
A beautiful prayer is rising from mind and reaching up to God. This poem is very nice and interesting. We feel essence of your penning.