Oh, Dani,
Five years is
not enough time
to forget your smile
...
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This is a great memorial, Spock! Though it is deeply personal, I still feel a connection. She must have been a wonderful child.
I have three grown daughters, my heart breaks for you. I find it hard to even think about. Beautifully expressed
Thank you. We never know when our time is up. I just try to live a good life.
What a lovely tribute to this beautiful person and the beautiful memory that is yours to keep.
Thanks. I cherish the memories of her. She was my only daughter.
A lovely poem! Your word choices are good and help us to see her as a child, a teen, a woman. The form is interesting and unusual. Well done!
Thanks. It's a little piece of my journal not written anywhere else.
This poem is absolutely beautiful. I am literally unable to hold back the tears. I love the unique style and the content of the poem is wonderful.
Hi~ I never saw this moving tribute before. I have a grown daughter and my world would collapse without her. You moved me to tears. You are an excellent writer, Spock. I will try and FAV this. Bless you...xx. Panagiota Romios