Wednesday, January 2, 2013

[oh Daisy] Dreams To Spare. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh Daisy
Please don't be blue.
The sunshine
That I feel from you
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Kevin East
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Princess Lilypad 07 September 2013

You use very visual concepts in your writings. nimbus clouds. like it very much. ten!

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Beach Girl 15 August 2013

Fields of flowers That winter slew, Leave petals That a north wind blew- Into total disarray This is so beautifully written. Your words are like desert for the mind.

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Poetheart Morgan 02 January 2013

OH! Happy Dayse. But, If Dayse wants more than dreams? ? ? ? ? ? Happy she is! ! ! !

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Gajanan Mishra 02 January 2013

Just believe it is true. good. Thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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