[oh Daisy] Dreams To Spare. Comments

You use very visual concepts in your writings. nimbus clouds. like it very much. ten!

Fields of flowers That winter slew, Leave petals That a north wind blew- Into total disarray This is so beautifully written. Your words are like desert for the mind.

OH! Happy Dayse. But, If Dayse wants more than dreams? ? ? ? ? ? Happy she is! ! ! !

Just believe it is true. good. Thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.