Friday, May 22, 2015

Oh Captain! My Captain! Comments

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Hey there, sailor!
Why are you staring like a child?
Have you never seen a woman
Wearing nothing but a smile?
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Suzanne Hayasaki
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Glen Kappy 23 February 2019

well, suzanne, i don't know what else to say again but ummm... and hmmm... and okay... having had your warning, i smiled though it. btw, in the first stanza fourth line, do you mean to say " but" a smile? -glen

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Suzanne Hayasaki

Suzanne Hayasaki

Menomonee Falls, WI, USA
Suzanne Hayasaki
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Menomonee Falls, WI, USA
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