Sunday, November 15, 2009

Oh, Brittle Mind Comments

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Oh, brittle mind, leave all your worries behind.
Ripples in your hemispheres, whorls and whirls
Race through your fragile interior.
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Rani Turton
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Ranjit Ravindran 16 November 2009

Oh yeah... bliss and sense of reason are seasonal..but too jumbled to be predictable! Loved it Ma'am.

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Fay Slimm 15 November 2009

Brittle and indeed fragile too is the mind Rani - - a good reminder to de-stress it from time to time - - thank you 10 + + Fay

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Daniel Kempson 15 November 2009

A very poignant and engaging write Rani 10 Daniel thank you

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