Monday, October 28, 2019

Oh Be Careful What You Wish For Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh be careful what you wish for,
For it one day maybe simply granted.
There is always a heavy price to pay,
To leave you so very very disenchanted.
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Shaun Cronick
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Practicing Poetess 29 October 2019

A suspenseful poem with an unhappy ending. Unlike Ebenezer Scrooge, there was no Ghost of Christmas Future to rescue you, and send you back. A well-written grim poem.

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Shaun Cronick 01 November 2019

Thank you for your kind and generous comment Practicing Poetess. Your poems are spellbinding and so thought-provoking. And I thank you again.

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