Sunday, December 21, 2014

Ogling Breasts … 2112-14 Comments

Rating: 3.5

Ogling breasts some pesky prick
But! Ah the perfect roasted chick

Bill was tickled and had a grin
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Preitty Nayarr 17 January 2015

Liked the scenario, loved it :)))

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Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi 16 January 2015

Witty and great too. :)

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Yasmin Khan 31 December 2014

It's an amusing and vivid description of a shopping mall. It seems the writer observed it himself but the notes say otherwise. I enjoyed reading it.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 22 December 2014

Looked at me and made some way Smiled beamed and made my day A nicely done poem on an incident.Well expressed.I enjoyed it Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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