Darkness may deepen
Attacks may sharpen
You will be surrounded
Often insulted and offended
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Josh Mathews1 hour ago Kind of negative. Its really deep, but so negative. Comment 2 Comments+1 Interesting
Re: Often insulted (Score: 1) by graphitegirl on Tuesday, September 11,2012 (23: 36: 19) I think the line beware of your thoughts is an interesting line. The poem is interesting at well. I get this persecuted feel from it. Your comments on your poem are also interesting. Great meter in your poem and you do have style.
Xavier Paolo Josh Ledesma Mandreza2 hours ago I didn't know it could be that Sublime... Comment +1 not sure
Teresa Mahieu2 hours ago I did not really get the meaning of this poem.
i am only nine and i made it up my self i hope you liked it Samanthadawn Daniels1 hour ago will who ever likes it be my friend on facebook. Comment 1 Comment+1 Nicely...