Often, In My Dreams. Comments

Very nice poem good work

This poem is so deep and perceptive...Great job!

Nice poem, yes dreams are great without any boundries, I like it

The magnificent obsession of a vivid and alluring dream that lurks in the sub-conscious given birth through this beautiful poem. Very good writing. { Comments are reciprocal}

Well done Prakah and if no dreams in life what else we take?

A poem in simple words, narrating the experiance in a dream, well written.

If you look at the mind like I do after a blast damages your brain, you have to put yourself back together, senses can be cultivated cultured, and not controlled other than by monitoring our perceptions, balancing our gut and..... oh yes the feelings 1-2-3-4-5-6-7 and many many more ..... you want to take the next line and then I'll take the next It is not about who it is about why? and in the language arts the first and last syllable is always the same

loved the way you used simple language! think you've got a great poem here! i rated it a 10. keep writing... give us more.

your language is really simple. It bothered me for the most part but overall your message was clear and concise.

This is an excellent piece of poetry and is maturely written, the language and voice that you use is wonderful. I bequeath to you 10 marks.

An inauspicious pick, the end of my dream.............. dreams never end till you know...its the feelings of desire that shows you so...... very emotional poem with your real feelings express...... excellent. thanks for sharing 10++

Beautiful flows well I like your style!

Words move along nicely

great rhymes combine together to form such a wonderful peice... wow 10\10... keep up the good work...

Truly a dream nicely expressed by you covering the whole world and possibilities without end. Keep on dreaming. They may turn into the real thing. A lot of poets draw material from their dreams.

you did this poem good, a stream of conscious thoughts lighting up thye page like fireworks on a festive night. I give it a 10 You're good my poet friend....greatness is next

beautifully written, I really enjoyed it, I hope you continue to write more

Keep up the good work. Let us see more from you.

My mind too does dream a lot..I often marvel at its endurance...even when I am down with the most dreadful disease it keeps on dreaming! loved the way you presented it all...dream, destiny, fate, reality.... well done. 10

lonely soul speaks in this poem... very good one