Sunday, February 22, 2009

Often I Think And Oft I See Comments

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Often I think and oft I see
The alien clutches, I want to flee
I can not wait and can not rate
Ins and outs of, this troubled debate
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Khairul Ahsan 17 May 2018

'No one to bury, no one to weep No one to cover them no one to heap The clash of civilization this was not But the power hungry has it brought' - These lines really touched me, made me sad! (Please edit the spelling of the word 'burry' in your poem. The correct spelling is 'bury'.)

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Khairul Ahsan 17 May 2018

You have nicely put into words what you what you've thought on what you've seen. The poets are often deeply disturbed by the ghastly atrocities perpetrated in the name of peace, to maintain 'monopoly and hegemony' of the powers that be, but cannot really do anything but vociferously condemn.

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Akhtar Jawad 03 August 2014

A deep meesage in a well wrote poem.

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Barry A. Lanier 13 March 2009

Bless the intensity and urgency of your message and advocacy...for it is all the people of the world who feel your emotion....man has gone biserk....

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