Sunday, February 10, 2019

Often I Ask Comments

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I Often Ask To Myself,
What is Missing From My Cabinet?
I Often Try To Meet With Self Beyond.
I Run Behind Myself.
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Konab Ghumman
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Edward Kofi Louis 10 April 2019

Struggles! ! ! Hustle and bustle; Inner self, Inner thoughts. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Nadeem Ishaque 28 March 2019

Although written in first person, this poem can be read as a general reflection on manifest actions, the quest for intrinsic goals that motivate actions and the disparity or gulf between actions and intentionality. The common format of each stanza gives the poem a strong connective thread and structural resonance. Very nice work. Please keep writing!

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Sam Gull 11 March 2019

I like the theme as well as the simple diction. I Often Ask To Myself, What is Missing From My Cabinet? I Often Try To Meet With Self Beyond. I Run Behind Myself.

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Noreen KHAN 11 March 2019

Often Ask To Myself. Why Always Unworthy Relations? I Often Try To Pursuit Worthiness, I Run Behind Sincerity. Greatly describe.

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