Monday, April 21, 2014

Office Commuter (1) Comments

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Emptied of rain, the convalescent sky
Grows luminous again, all is cleansed.
Bicycles emerge from passageways
And weld in long formations;
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Ananta Madhavan
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Roseann Shawiak 11 August 2015

Very deep and well thought out, Ananta! Can feel the doubts, uncertainty, disorder of the world in your introspective mood, a difficult position to be in. Can appreciate your perspective in this poem. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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