Offering Comments

Wow.... a very nice poem.... surrendering oneself.... to the one beyond.. reason... is but a total forgetting of one life..... your so true and thought appealing of my soul.. thank you... God bless.... a 10 point

We always surrender in His loving will...such beautiful poetic offering you have made, a 10.

wowww! ! ! ! ! beautiful Oh lord, strike, strike, strike at the root of penury in my heart A++++++and 10++++++++ regards anjali

The true poet is always unaware of himself when he is creating. Lovely work. Warm regards, Sandra

'Yo Vedha Nihitham Guhayam Parame Vyoman'...thus says Vedic Philosophy... that means 'he who knows, it is in the vast hollowness of heart inside HE abides'... eternal truth very beautifully expressed, Sarvesh...you are drifting on a superior thought level along with your poem here...10