Wednesday, February 26, 2014

Off The Track Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes it so happens;
That best minds behaving erratic
Going afar off the track
Grieving flawless souls into panic
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Tanmay Kumar Sankhua 08 March 2014

A poem on a very sensitive stuff very powerfully presented.....................

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Valsa George 27 February 2014

Seeing best minds growing wicked and behaving erratic is very upsetting! The motive or urge behind some notorious actions often remain a mystery! Apple is a lovesome fruit... but one rotten apple in a pack can spoil many! The depravation of the brainy or the cream of the society is as foul as butter going rancid! A gruesome act is powerfully presented! !

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Light and darkness, gladness and sadness- when great minds are used for great evil. What a waste! Could they not have used their brilliance to help to make better our lost planet? Powerful poem with a truth that makes the heart cry.

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Geetha Jayakumar 26 February 2014

Once again a Beautiful write. People often go out of track, not because of poverty but when such blunder becomes their passion, nothing can be done. If they have utilised this brain in something, they would have definitely created history. Loved reading it.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 26 February 2014

Many many thanks.........Dineshji.........I am humbled..........I am awaiting your comment on 'A date with destiny'...... it's a request, please don't take it otherwise.......

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Dinesan Madathil 26 February 2014

A deep poem in composition and we have to reconcile to this journey on and off the track.

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