Off Ramp Comments

Begs to escape and I wonder, will we ever escape Nice write. Congrats on member POD.

Congrats for the honours of POTD...........Wonderful poem.10++

I was captured by the first two lines, then stayed for the ride. Very imaginative and vivid piece. Well done, and congratulations!

Very thought provoking and well done. Congratulations on poem of the day.

To escape! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Superb write. Profound. Beautifully descriptive.

that little blue bird, that little ray of light that never quite leaves, just hides, Congrats for being chosen for the day!

Such a well done poem. I really like the imagery and the wrecking ball sun really captured my attention and kept me reading.

Poem of the day Has come your way! You never sought it, But now you've got it!

I liked this write. Great imagery, one could feel, see, hear what was going on in the verses. Gets better the more you read it. Excellently written poem. Great interpretation. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX