Wednesday, April 1, 2009

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Pain as deep as a cavern,
Torrid, blistering, burn,
Bleak, withered, blight,
Pounding heart in flight,
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Maren Louise
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Gordon Wilkinson 10 May 2009

A lost love leaves such a cavern - very well written 10

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Emily Oldham 10 May 2009

wow... layered in meaning and ambiguous. i love it

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