Of Thirst Hunger And Sleep... Comments

a fine image of all three sir...and also you bring out the various faces of each....10

these three constitute 'triad' brahma vishnu maheswara... father son and the holy spirit

Good images come to my mind here...strong write...thank you

Nice one! really could relate to the 'sleep' part

Beautiful and exquisite portrayal of Thirst, Hunger and Sleep... Really enjoyed reading... Thanks... Regards, Kamran

Sensual underpinnings...penned with much taste....I see that two of the three verses are in perfect traditional Zen Haiku metreing(5-7-5) ....And i don't think this was by accident! Astute, & innovative write, Kesav... P.S...If you so celebrate, i herenow wish you a joyous, and reflective Diwali Feast.May the power of Knowledge, and spiritual light be with you & yours. fjr **

Kesav, lots of images here; satisfied I hope. Well written poetry 10/10

Softly but with passion fills the air of your talent... Very nicely construted, and to the point... Bonnie

Hey Kesav, A small one but says it all ++++++10 regards anju

A very well constructed poem and a pleasure to read. Best wishes, Andrew

hunger: the largest religion on earth! better than all known religions!

An amazing composition, I really love it. Wonderful.

realistic and beautiful... the usage of words dint let the meaning get lost.... : D

true to its core. wonderful. thanks sir. Loved it.

beautiful....thought provoking....eloquent indeed!

the basic needs of human life expressed in such an eloquent manner.. crisp and fine all through.

A wonderful poem. Use of imagery is excellent. u get 10++

Very good poem. I loved the use of metaphors in this piece. Great write.

i really liked this poem. just alittle hint of everything :)

Very clear and honest expression in simple english... I really liked this...