Monday, September 26, 2011

Of The Love That I See No More, Comments

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The sun is setting on a lonely day
The colours are splitting, the perfect way
Your strolling home as you see this too
And I watch from a window thinking of you.
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Shaikh Haneef
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Unwritten Soul 26 September 2011

Again this is good poem from you but, not as deep as 'grandma'..that piece really soothing and grab soul out from any fear state...BUT this one also have a nice flowing point, i feel it really well written and the emotion really there...keep it up_Unwritten Soul

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