Thursday, October 29, 2009

Of Slavery Rain... Comments

Rating: 0.0

its tormentous falls
plaited the the leaves and trees with watery coiffeur
it made them mumble.it made them murmur.
it made them grumble.it made them stumble.
...
Read full text

OLUMIDE AYODELE
COMMENTS
Chitra - 29 October 2009

a strong theme...with a strong message well expressed through resonant images

0 0 Reply
Tolulope Akinwole 29 October 2009

astonishing use of language. the poem speaks softly, silently, rhythmically, but STRONGLY.10 for it.

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success