Friday, April 13, 2018

Of Scars And Story's The Orangutan [ Funny With A Message] Comments

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THE STORY

Hi feet were large and out of shape
and he walked along with a wide gate
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The Muse 14 April 2018

Nice rhythm & alliteration. Love the story as well.

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The Muse 14 April 2018

Nice rhythm & alliteration.

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Carl Roussell 13 April 2018

I like this; the great apes are in jeopardy and it seems as though we don't have the wisdom to ensure their survival.

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