Tuesday, March 18, 2008

Of Rainy Seasons Comments

Rating: 5.0

The dribbling sheets
Touch in noiseless triumph:
Trapped, we crowd
In the house's amber, artificial light,
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Jonzo Bandwagoner
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Jazib Kamalvi 19 September 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Jonzo. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Landrey 25 March 2008

definitely strong poem. very likable. the best part is undoubtedly 'remain' and 'rain' powerful assonance. -landrey

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Jonzo Bandwagoner

Jonzo Bandwagoner

Huntington, NY
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