Wednesday, March 23, 2005

Of Poets, Poetry And Acrimony Comments

Rating: 4.3

when i think
of all the clean words
i used to use on you
and how
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Amberlee Carter
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Amberlee, if you keep posting work like this i might become envious. :) well done! Jake

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Poetry Hound 24 March 2005

Very original in style and substance. Amberlee, you're becoming a star in my book.

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kenneth william snow 24 March 2005

Amberlee. I like this very much. Fix the third line from the end...I think you mean no instead of now. Kenneth

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Peter A. Crowther 24 March 2005

I like the short line style and love the ending

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