Friday, October 25, 2013

Of Olivers Comments

Rating: 4.5

'Please sir, can I have some more',
That twist of fate, leaving me hungry, still
unsatisfied
with empty bowl,
...
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Susan Lacovara
COMMENTS
Anthony Burkett 02 February 2014

The tune memories... the favorite melodies of a searching heart... wonderfully sung in the bittersweet note of love.

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Unwritten Soul 27 October 2013

Why i like reading yours...because u always bring the past be a new again, the freshness of the feeling is still there...the memories that never go anywhere...and how years failed to change you...i like the honesty, style and way you express including this write_Soul

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Danny Draper 26 October 2013

Singing with numb and swollen gums and often partly mumb tongue, a treat of incongruous utterances, but a symphony of loving intent. A fine journey through Oliver's. One and all. Keep dusting them off your whole life. What for some is living in the past is for others heritage rejoyced in measured doses.

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Khairul Ahsan 25 October 2013

Excellent! The last stanza is the best among all the good ones.

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Susan Lacovara

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