Of Life, The Flow Comments

Wow Ever So Powerful And Moving! ! ! ! ! Heart Touching To Soul! ! ! ! ! Thank You For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

Gone are the smiles, That with you one day, We shared together, Like children at play.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - I think this was a well chosen metaphor for this poem, it sparks a nostalgia, a yearning, in and of itself. Excellent, Sandra.10

We all need to both give and receive love. Peace and love, Sandra

Life seems like a shadow. Unhappiness darkens the steps of life. Frustration breaks life's status. With day, smiles are gone away. This poem is wonderful and sadness is wisely presented in this poem...10