Thursday, August 18, 2016

Of Life's Lesson's Learned... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pensive as this moment
.....Long past as days of before
Comes flashing 'cross my deep rooted hours
Opening wide 'memories haunted door';
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Susan Williams 18 August 2016

You are in a solemnly reflective mood today- -no Theo effervescence today but that is a right path to choose because the topic deserves a serious presentation- - - - -.Clearer than ever are they... The seconds- the minutes - they simply roll Some are treasured - some regret filled Leaving permanent imprints upon my soul; - - - - - - - - - - vision of a prophet here. I have learned one of life's lessons- - - never pass up a Theo Onken poem because you only succeed in short-changing yourself!

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Theodora Onken 10 September 2016

Susan, thank you so much! So sorry, i have been so remiss. Always look forward to your reviews-they are as good - as your poetry. You missed your calling- -Siskel & Ebert just thought they were the best! This one was written straight from my heart and soul. Again, dear Susan, i thank you! ! !

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