Of Lies Promises And Prayers... Comments

all the three were excellent..true..lies has a grin'''promises become hard..and promise is something between the mind and the lip

a theme which can be said everyday feelings...its true and simply good!

Your words pegged each of your titles very well. Your defining of lies, promises and prayers are greater than what the dictionary could label them as. Very nicely done.

I am not ususally a fan of haiku but you have made me like these alot. Great job!

reads great...i personally like few words...more depth

Amazing composition, love these.

LOVE THIS! ! ! ! ! Absolutely enjoyed every word 10+

A string of excellent haikus.Loved the selection of words.

the wisdom of the creator is revealed in your poem... its not all in our mind is reflected by our actions... yet. other can predict whats the outcome...our mind speaks, our lips murmor...its not what the mind talk that the lips do...but God know before your mind think and your mouth say... the secret and wisdom of God only reserved to the giver of everything is now.....in our hand..thank you...a 10

This is so rich in visual images. The images are moreover not arbitrary, pretty or 'poetic' - they truly embody your meaning. Three paintings lie beneath the words, waiting to be realized.

Three different situations are packed in one short poem, with contradictions like bitter-sweet, hot-cold and so on. A nice work.

This poem stands as a treatise on how to write poetry! Such profound concept told in few compelling words of authority...10+++++++++++++++Kudos to u Sir

A very profound piece Ke, I particularly liked the second stanza, well done Lynda xx

Truth of life nicely presented! Thanks for sharing.

the insider-outsider....?

excellent work of art i must compliment.3 in one and 1 in three. good job.

three haikus-, how did i fail to recognise. honest, it almost hurts.lovely composition in traditional form.m

The everyday masks are a facade for lies and hypocrisy, and for promises that are never kept. A truthfull comment on social guises.

A very succinct comment on the world in which we live. Your poem is brief, but very effective. Poignant too. Because you wish very much that such duality would just go away. It will not, of course. But the true poet will find his own truth and write on. Your own work proves that, Kesav. Excellent write. Always your friend, Sandra

I always love the idea of masks...makes you search for what is behind them...what you find is another journey...nice work