Of Golden Leaves Comments

Hello David! Tis a great share! Thank you.

Wonderful poem David x Loved it! Top marks x

A beautiful write of life's course and the reassurance of it's resolution in peace. A wonderful ending with the last tow lines being my favorite.

A poem full of heartfelt feelings. A poem written with life blood. A masterpiece is the true lifeblood of a master spirit.

We make a grave in our heart for our sorrow And wait for a greater peace than we have known When fear and worry no longer matter After we have reaped what we have sown. Brilliant and profound wordings.

I couldn't complete. I will visit this insightful piece of work some other day!

We make a grave in our heart for sorrow to dwell forever.

Yes sir you have very well penned and connected it to golden leaves. We need to heal the wounded heart. I loved these lines mostWe make a grave in our heart for our sorrow And wait for a greater peace than we have known....into my favorites.

‘Tis time to mend this wounded heart Since it slowed to a miniscule beat To see with my eyes the face of the world And say ‘hello’ to all I greet. a great poem indeed. tony

When you travel in path new hopes and fears now line your path. But there is no need to worry about. Past mistakes done cannot be rectified but we can rectify these in future after learning gained from these. The face of the world calls and tells us hello. After we have reaped what we have sown. This is very true as every action gives a reaction. An excellent poem is brilliantly penned.10

I enjoyed reading or the experience of Golden Years. Sounds like you have found peace where you are now great write

We make a grave in our heart for our sorrow And wait for a greater peace than we have known When fear and worry no longer matter After we have reaped what we have sown very telling lines. there is philosophy of life and spirituality which leads to atonement. thank you dear Poet.

A very thoughtful treatment of the theme, and so very true. We are all on the same road and yet no one knows at what stage he or she is. Nice poem.

Golden piece of gold and in old ways what gone has gone but made you brave with brain and heart / well done wish you the best

Truly beautiful words, particularly the last verse. Great poet notes too. Thank You

A beautiful and thoughtful mellow write as autumn that knocks at the door now..... It remembers me some lines: 'Leaves believe such letting go is Faith and Faith is Grace and Grace is God and God is Love I agree with the leaves.(African-American poet Lucille Clifton)

The feeling in this poem expressed well. Sally

As autumn coming near to the window panel, greeting..you done Hello the fall with beautiful write..a memory recalled in such nice poem..loved it David..remember still we have spring ahead but before that be ready for harsh winter...just life threat telling us, both are exist so get ready..no choice! LOL_Soul

a beautiful write David. About the days of our lives. the last stanza is great thoughts. Love can come again and be delightful. A nice title.

A sadly, touching poem. Dave give love a second chance, you might be surprised. Revealing and gracefully done