I was not looking when you found me
you stopped just long enough to smile.
I felt your presence all around me
and hoped that you would stay awhile.
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Wonderful poem...... A reading worth of gold......10/10. Regards Naseer
this is a very good poem. I have read lots of your poem and really your works are inspiring......
I have to agree with Lawrence.. you encompass such a variety of themes and subjects with such ease and fluidity.. It is always wonderful reading your work.
If there's any doubt that Mr. Nehrlich (Herbert) is not one of Poemhunter's most 'inventive' and consistent poets to come our way, let that hesitation be removed! He reveals..yet, another side of his awesome abilities! Thanks Herbert! There's got to be a Full Moon dispersing you with such wonderful text...of late! ...lol Very nice, Herbert! I really enjoy this one! L
Any way of removing Pauls stuff? ? Except the way I had to do it. Boy it's hard having to start all over again but better than having the messages trashed/ Hugs Jan
The sentiment in your poem is lovely, thank you Herbert. Sue.
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A man who wants his woman to have the very best....can't argue with that. Inspiring Herbert. I like it.. adria
Sigh! How sweet and innocent and laced with love. Beautiful writing.