Thursday, April 14, 2016

Of First Love... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tonight the sky was filled with sequins
And in the further corner - i could see
What resembled a cluster of pretty posies...
Not unlike the flowers you last gave to me.
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Theodora Onken 14 April 2016

Ratnakar, thank you so very much! You are too kind!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 14 April 2016

Beautifully envisioned poem with rhythm and rhyme. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Theodora (Theo) Onken

Theodora (Theo) Onken

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