A flower I brought
and gently placed it
upon my dreams' grave
Farewell, I said
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upon my dreams' grave...the flower i placed there......... and never looked back again...... sentiments expressed in a realistic way. tony
you should label this one ''tanka'': it is indeed a tanka [btw, also tanka don't have titles]
Wonerful dream.. actually as i read about the grave i was sad. thank you very much dear poet.. God bless u. may there be so many rosed in your life. but not on the grave, in your heart but.. tony
Fabulous dreams....loved reading this beautiful little poem! (10)
Such a kind comment! Appreciated!