Sunday, July 18, 2010

Of Darkness Comments

Rating: 5.0

A monstrous hand
Surrounds the Earth
Encompassing all
With thunderous force
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Alex Gomez
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Well written my freind. A very unique rhyme scheme with the first and last verses not rhyming but the middle three flowing and rhyming nicely. From the reading standpoing the fact that the last verse does not rhyme cancels the flow that was created in the previous three verses. Other that that a very vivid and beautiful work.

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Chloe Francis 19 July 2010

Wow... this is kinda how i feel about the world too...

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Baru Gobira 18 July 2010

Welcome back and thats from someone who has been missing from 2006. It seems we poets are accursed to stop, ponder, postpone and then a flurry of activity proclaims we have something to say. ___Baru Gobira

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Alex Gomez 18 July 2010

I'm trying to get back in the game. Haven't written anything decent in a while, so I'm bringing the spark back.

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