Of Darkness Comments

Well written my freind. A very unique rhyme scheme with the first and last verses not rhyming but the middle three flowing and rhyming nicely. From the reading standpoing the fact that the last verse does not rhyme cancels the flow that was created in the previous three verses. Other that that a very vivid and beautiful work.

Wow... this is kinda how i feel about the world too...

Welcome back and thats from someone who has been missing from 2006. It seems we poets are accursed to stop, ponder, postpone and then a flurry of activity proclaims we have something to say. ___Baru Gobira

I'm trying to get back in the game. Haven't written anything decent in a while, so I'm bringing the spark back.