The child cried out in unaffected glee.
The adult smiled impassively,
'Tis common, they are all around, ' said he.
The child saw not the yellow dotted lea.
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Oh it is so beautiful, simply beautiful, Adeline, I feel so much, I see the passion the innocence that glows through a child's heart, a flower in a Divine form, let it take you away and carry you into the fields of sun and love once more. Thank you so much Adeline. Love and Light
Oh this is very subtle and beautiful writing....There are few lessons i took here and there..the story just amazing walk along the rhythm..Feel good for someone expert in poetry did comment my poem...we met in dandelion smile, you lend sincere voice, for me to learn more..Thanks for sharing and thanks again for commenting my dandelion :) _ Unwritten Soul
To shed some tears, to show show some love, to spend some time with a loved one down in the lea must be a great feeling as time goes on. A very great write and once again I love the way your poems rhyme. Your friend Lynn
abso amazing and beautiful.... i am mesmerised.... of course u teach poetry.....but still....loved it i am not qualified to talk much about your poem... a daunted novice if i may your lines bring to fore an important matter in such a subtle and colorful example...just beautiful.... simple charming and classical....thanx 10 and cheers sat
Such a beautiful poem Adeline.Thank you.