Friday, June 7, 2019

Of Cats And Birds Comments

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White feathers lie scattered
On the soft green grass
Outside my window
Under the big Banyan tree
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Ruta Mohapatra
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Paul Brookes 26 August 2019

The cat and the bird the bird and the earth the cat and the earth grass and the cow on do on great cycle well written

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Ruta Mohapatra 27 August 2019

Thank you, Paul, for visiting my page and for the nice comment!

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Bharati Nayak 17 June 2019

Don't know how to feel Don't know what to feel Feel happy for the cat? Sad for the bird? Oh, these things happen In this beautiful green world - - - - A question that really puzzles! A wonderful poem, thanks for sharing.

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Ruta Mohapatra 18 June 2019

Thank you, Bharati, for taking the time to visit my poem!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 June 2019

This lovely poem reminds me when I was just 15 circle circle lovely star let all wonder where you are soon you will become a cycle all will love to tricycle circle circle litle star CYCLIC ONLY SINCE AND FOREVER WE ALL ARE

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