Of Barren Lands And Deserts! ! Comments
seems like I am getting drawn to
the beauty of barren lands and the deserts,
as fiercely as I go in my best efforts
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A deep and meaningful piece; I presume it is about making do with past experiences to shade light on others and make the world a better place.
Very Powerful! ! ! ! ! Very Moving Poem! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
Barren deserts are warm a place to go to when you feel the cold.
get burned and be happy spreading the warmth like Sun, to every coldest of the hearts, that might freeze another heart, otherwise! Your poetic genius is reflected in the above lines. Congrats!
A lovely piece of poetry! My favorite lines: coldness is enough.. this coldness/is so enough.. I got so frozen-up/as much as my wishes and pleads for love! .....10
' get burned and be happy spreading the warmth like sun' - liked these lines
Your poem bespeaks of the dryness of life without love that is comparable to the arid deserts you presented a contrast between waamth and cold so well. Thank you.
"Seems like I am getting drawn to..." such a catchy beginning.
"Seems like I am getting drawn to..." such a catchy beginning.
seems like I am getting drawn to the beauty of barren lands and the deserts, as fiercely as I go in my best efforts to dry-up every drop of love that never quenches my thirst! the pain is getting so dry, I am getting in love with the dryness! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ___________________________- find no warmth in these cold hearts.., no warmth, all good now to go find my place in the scorching heats, get burned and be happy spreading the warmth like Sun, to every coldest of the hearts, that might freeze another heart, otherwise! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -A powerful and heart touching poem that will melt the coldest heart.Thanks for sharing.
A poetic wish. Sometimes there is more peace in a barren land than in a crowded city. We all need to take a break. A beautifully expressed poem.
Nice poem, Siddharta! The pic goes very well with the poem...Keep writing...It will keep your creative juices alive and stop you from drying up in the barren lands.
This is very well written my friend. I really enjoyed it. My favorite line has to be get burned and be happy spreading the warmth like Sun, to every coldest of the hearts, that might freeze another heart, otherwise! Simply amazing
I feel elated reading your comment on my very first Poem which I have written in Blissful times in Berlin. No matter if I breath last in next seconds!
Dear Sir Craig, this was my first ever attempt on Poetry.. and had cried several times for the comments I read on this! I never knew when I wrote this Poem in 6 Minutes just because of a simple hurt! I Never felt to edit it as it came good I think So! May be as members said I mettwo poles at same time s Heat and cold! I loved and still like every comment on my this Poem and yours too! ! Bless me Sir that I live next few days! - Siddartha Me!
a poem full of heartfelt feelings that are searching for a warmer place with good hearts? ...........well written.
Get burned and be happy spreading the warmth like sun..to be happy in times of hard times..amazing
Well written Siddharth Saab.. as fiercely as I go in my best efforts to dry-up every drop of love that never quenches my thirst! the pain is getting so dry, I am getting in love with the dryness! A great imagery of your thoughts, thanks for sharing
Please Avik Never ever call me Saab! ! I only wrote cosmic emotions!
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9/4/2025 9:03:36 PM # 1.0.0
I quote Rilke: Then this is guilt if anything be guilt: not to draw out the freedom in the one you love, with all the freedom we can find in ourselves. We must when we love do this one thing: Release one another, for to hold on to love comes easily, and need not at first be learnt.