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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Geetha Jayakumar 20 August 2014

A thoughtful poem from your pen. Just a moment is enough to disturb our thoughts... Beautiful story you have presented here. very true said, old thoughts blinded the robber. on seeing the gold. Once again took him to past and he repeated the same mistake again. Powerful write. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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Salini Nair 19 August 2014

definitely thoughts of past will disturb us...............fantastic write.................

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Valsa George 18 August 2014

A fleeting thought can upset our equillibrium! A bad thought can destroy our happiness in no time... So we should try to foster only good thoughts! I enjoyed the story of the burglar who got blinded by the sight of shimmering gold! A great write with a powerful message!

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