Saturday, May 23, 2015

Of All Beginnings Comments

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First year of all beginnings
Seated in a quiet lighted room
Trying to keep myself occupied
But that's when you entered the room
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Meriam Joseph
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Jm Toboso 17 December 2015

how lovely, i like your diction coz it just got that flavour and ability to cleverly express your feelings. i like the way you poetically induces feelings of remorse, regret and nostalgia in the same poem. this is a poem of it's own kind

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Soulo Moon 29 November 2015

like a plain song from the heart, I like your poem.

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Stephanie Hazle 26 November 2015

Its beautiful Meriam. And very relatable. Regret is something we all battle at some point in life, and I believe its best used as a stepping stone into the freedom of lessons learned.

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Snir Yacoby 26 November 2015

I like it. :) In my opinion, it really describes the feeling of love and shyness and the intensity of them combined.

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