I'm no parlour soldier
for the umpteenth time
i've slung unto my shoulder
the rounds that notch my clime.
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I liked the flow and tempo of the poem. There is a strong, personal message being expressed and it adds delight to the reader to try to decipher the writer's meaning. Very intriguing poem.
I like the flow of this poem. You have a way of gluing your readers' eyes till the last. I like the last two lines. There's something of a firm believe in them; just like everything in life, there are always few exceptions.