Saturday, September 6, 2008

Of A Mockbird Comments

Rating: 5.0

The cooling breath of evening rests
About the mock bird's prided nest
Where tiny creatures void of fear
Sleep cradled 'neath a watchful ear.
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Jean Mallette
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David Threadgold 15 September 2008

Hi Jean. An unbelieveable poem and how you made it flow is nothing short of brilliant. it must be nothing less than a **10** I would give more if I could. Regards Dave T

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 06 September 2008

Jeannie...You continue to impress.This work glides like a coin tossed 'cross an icepond...Rhythm & Rhyme in juxtaposed sync....Sixty lines of stellar craftsmanship, indeed... ________ ~ F j R ~ __2008__ _________

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