Of A Hideout Mysterious... Comments

Thanks for your immediate response Sarvesh...your poem 'The Tale of A Night' is at par...in its wit and wisdom alike Kesav

ohh yes, i've read this. its wonderful. its deep, with as much wit as wisdom; which is your characteristic, sir. loved it. thank you.

Am reading this poem for the second and cannot help marveling at the beautiful imagery...another masterpiece from you... Cheers

absolute beauty and to end it as a grandma story..wow..the sleepy nature of the night and the refreshing face of the sun brought out very well

I'm speechless. You were right i love this poem. I love the concept and your use of words 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

O Keshav, from you all wisdom arise, In your radiance the Sun glows to rise. I really enjoyed this wonderful write from you. CP

Day brings aspirations along with light Night swings the mind with frietening dark Dear Poet, this is how - You put the duo Though it is one cycle clock. Day motivates all activities of hope Night interrogates on all those actions Day with hectctic tasks needs a break Night of apprehensions await the hopes Mystery of Sun Light to those sleeping darkness Is ofcourse nature's wonder It's the melting point of these duos. Apprehensions puts the Mystery in place Aspirations crack the doubts with day break. Dear Poet, Kudos for this wonderful duos.

Grand-ma's words enlighten the minds awake to awaken the sleeping minds...10+

you were right my friend. I genuinely liked this poem. a perfect ten for this one.

Lovely thoughts of nature and brings all the senses alive. Great! Best Wishes, Marilyn

Hai gi, how are you doing these days? i read it, rather i would say i devoured it outright. it was a passage, a voyage and a realization and simple philosophy put cubes of words. sun light thus, my grandma said, remained mysterious ever to dark sleeping minds... mysterious to me too i call it a brilliant look at the very mundane and used. i got a chance to read it. great you did it sir. jaypee it is long time i sent something on this page. now i am trnaslating a book of malayalam poetry. jay[ee

such a wonderful poem.... i truly enjoyed this one.

this is one of a mystic poem.....i ever read.... so revealing of what's the purpose of life.... i salute of what you shared the world....wonderful indeed...please keeps on writing.... i like your style...God bless you my friend a ten point

This is a wonderful piece. Such a brilliant piece by you.

An interesting poem. Lovely.

your wise write urges us all to face both the sunny rays and silvery beams need to go beyond life's ebbs and flows there is much more than the just light and shadow the mystic space in between is infact mind duality and is the most ignored reality

keshavji, lucky you are that you had a grandma to tell you lot about life... i am worried so much that now a days they are thrown out like waste... will you write a piece on this?

Reads as if a Fable, nothing grows in the dark, an excellent poem. Nice to read.....10+

True... i loved this poem... how poet depict the hidden scenes... amazing theme.. admiring piece...

Marvelous review on my write, Mark...thanks a lot...