Of A Compromise Pact Comments

It's out with the gloves. Enchanting poem. Most enjoyed.

Can't just fix one such of compromise pact These days... its every day act. Reginal powers... of sun and the moon Could be altered over an agreement croon. The down pour.... bringing Colossal flood On the rowing boat, press goes publishing... You have captured a whole lot of current senarios Whom to blame.. whom not...? ! ! ! All is fair in this political game.

gossiping clouds! ! ! ...very imaginative...great read

Charming, Fantastic, Wonderful, Lovely and A Beautiful poem well said.. I have no other words to say..10++

you have brilliantly used our celestial kins to drive your point home; such intersting funny images. the title takes the cake- of a compromise pact and in the end gossiping clouds. my fertile imagination couldn't help visualising, and i am throughly tickled.very terse, full of humour 10 Mamta

That is true, one day they will steal heavenly dodies and announce it in the press too. well written Kesav.10

it goes to my favourite poems!

such a witty and a humorous piece.it brought a smile on my face.really quite unique.thanks for sharing sir!

Another piece of classical humour. But the speciality of this poem is that you could yarn it in very few words, compactly, without missing any detail.....wonderful Sir.

Clever you Kesav! The imagery and sequential press collide in the sky, makes for witty brilliant poetry. love Karin

A good thought provoking poem! It also makes me think of our Delhi Govt. for the sake of Asian Games 2010, is compromising with the price index of commodities, making the 'am admi' (the common citizens) suffer all the time, where the ordinary citizens are not bothered about this game & the Govt's compromise! 10! -Raj

an enchanting poem! very different, with a slight touch of humour, and some wonderful imagery. out-of-the-box, as always! thank you sir.

Charming, beautiful lines like moon light.10

a very interesting and nice piece for this rainy and windy afternoon.Love it. Thanks for sharing your thoughts

fantastic! rgrds/salu

First time I read a nature poem with professional, business terms..each line is effectively catchy...100 tens....thank you

a wonderful write on a lazy morning rain...gossiping clouds...press pouring down rain...bullying bargain talks between the sun and moon...a political scene well created up there...the compromise did not work and the pressing rain from gossiping clouds...excellent sir...this goes into my favs

you're always a bit naughty aren't you Kesav? as above, as below.....LOL

I agree with Patti, this one is ingenius, amazing and extremely impressive Kesav...The gossiping clouds are the icing on the cake..10+++++

Kesav, this is so charming and entertaining. I don't know how on earth you came up with such an ingenius idea, but I do applaud..(smile)