Move aside, Keokra-Dong
Get out of my sight, Tazing-Dong
Let me see the sky-kissing Himalaya.
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Harun how well you have shown your love for the sky kissing Himalaya! Bravo!
The energy and excitement you show here are admirable, and I love the way you incorporate so many Indian place-names. The only adverse comment I could make would be that dolphins, being mammals, have lungs, not gills.
its a 10. its amazing how you described moments from a dolphins point of view
it's a 'story telling' poem, so well written, suggestive and I guess everybody can relate to, I gotta say you express your ideas very well, I loved teh images and the tone and your well chosen words, lovely poem 10++
What a journey Harun, Beautiful imagery, very beautifully penned. Thanks for sharing
Very interesting style of poetry well done