Sunday, March 15, 2009

Odyssey Of The Gangetic Dolphin Comments

Rating: 5.0

Move aside, Keokra-Dong
Get out of my sight, Tazing-Dong
Let me see the sky-kissing Himalaya.
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Harun Al Nasif
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Brian Jani 09 June 2014

Very interesting style of poetry well done

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Matt Mooney 22 July 2009

Harun how well you have shown your love for the sky kissing Himalaya! Bravo!

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Paul Hansford 11 July 2009

The energy and excitement you show here are admirable, and I love the way you incorporate so many Indian place-names. The only adverse comment I could make would be that dolphins, being mammals, have lungs, not gills.

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Elizabeth Marco 11 July 2009

I adored it! It was wonderful! 10!

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Alicia Phillips 10 July 2009

i love it i give you a 10

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Obed Souza 11 June 2009

Your words are powerful! Nice doing!

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Hannah Minton 02 June 2009

its a 10. its amazing how you described moments from a dolphins point of view

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 May 2009

Excellent work. Love this poem. 10 with pleasure.

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Bright Rose 22 May 2009

it's a 'story telling' poem, so well written, suggestive and I guess everybody can relate to, I gotta say you express your ideas very well, I loved teh images and the tone and your well chosen words, lovely poem 10++

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ata khan 20 April 2009

What a journey Harun, Beautiful imagery, very beautifully penned. Thanks for sharing

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