Wednesday, May 6, 2009

Odor Of Feminity Comments

Rating: 4.5

The aroma that rises
When the olive like shades
That lurks in the corners
Glazed, seek the honey like browns
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Reshma Ramesh
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Anjali Sinha 26 May 2009

OMG the chemistry that you possess lovely poem Resh I loved it a tenner from meeeee anjuuuuuu

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Jathin Aka Jesuzz 17 May 2009

nice poem resh............but the..comment of mr sathyanarayanan mvs below is perversion to max....................(Resh! I'm getting drowsy.............I keep looking at ur photo........mmmmmmmmm........sumptuous) ........god knows wat he dopes lookin at ur pic for so long

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David Hart 15 May 2009

Very well written piece!

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Sathyanarayana M V S 13 May 2009

Resh! I'm getting drowsy.............u are an enchanting...........angel......after reading ur romantics, I keep looking at ur photo........mmmmmmmmm........sumptuous

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Surya . 12 May 2009

odour of feminity none can escape.none should.very nice poem.posted 10 mam surya

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a fiminine poem with oily scented touch, a feminine call for others to reach the depth of that ocean with it's precious menerals, it's pearls, guarded by a sandy beach...10++++

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 10 May 2009

Splendid work once again.............

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Saadat Tahir 09 May 2009

as an afterthoughjt just lemme add qoute.. Premji premji (5/6/2009 4: 07: 00 AM) odor of femininity is the odor of life............... how true cheers

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Saadat Tahir 09 May 2009

hi reshma you done wonders to the word chemistry how tender and alluring...so very potent...stirs the being and arouses the senses wonderful cheers

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Angelic(Annie) Female 08 May 2009

Written so beautifully Reshma- well expressed of a women's femininity to the extreme :)

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Mario Rios Pinot 07 May 2009

Dear Reshma Ramesh, what a wonderful poem. I agree that we all need to learn: to get in touch with our feelings, prosody, the rules, techniques, anything that will help us write 'better' poems. Bangalore must have a great tradition of great poems perhaps songs. I once stayed a month with the Hare Krishnas here in NYC and the songs were wonderful. The prasadam? the food, the mercy, was nice.

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Woosh! how enticing. White flying hair and perfume breathing your odor. No man could resist this Reshma. Love it! Karin Anderson 10

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 06 May 2009

Are deodorant and perfume useful, then...........................Good Write...............

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Rommel Mark Marchan 06 May 2009

VERY AROUSING U MAKE ME POLYGAMOUS THINKER BRO

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rago rago 06 May 2009

fragrance of feminity............very nice.......let the fragrance spread every where...

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premji premji 06 May 2009

odor of femininity is the odor of life...............

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Catrina Heart 06 May 2009

Lovely poem Reshma, beautiful written sequel.............THanks for the great read!

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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