Tuesday, May 30, 2006

Odometer Comments

Rating: 5.0

I remember how
my new Mazda 626
flew over the road
as I watched the odometer
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Max Reif
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Lori Boulard 13 June 2006

I really liked this reflection, Max. I have some 'unidentifiable stuff' that has gathered as well. Too bad we can't reset our odometers!

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Anna Russell 08 June 2006

I agree with the last two comments. A truth for the 21st centuary. Hugs Anna xxx

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Joseph Daly 03 June 2006

A wonderful piece Max. There is a tapestry feel to this in that the words feel like the stiched ensuring that the whole does not fall apart. The metaphor is outstanding; at first simple but then I think that the final couple of lines introduce a feeling of unexpectedness.

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Duncan Wyllie 30 May 2006

No strong odours from you I trust Max, but yes I understand and connect to this one, the thought of mortality, a deep discussion I see before me, so for now I will just say I love the refreshing feel to this one Love duncan X

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