Friday, June 14, 2013

Odes, Kubla Khan Comments

Rating: 5.0

Naked Venus of desire
the Evening Star of man’s unrest
adorned in dreams of wanton fire
was charmed by Kubla Khan’s request
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Danny Draper 24 October 2013

There be vast project and construction in this endeavour to honour the mighty Khan and his Venus in excelsior.

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Sun Shine 01 August 2013

Oh My God! ! ! ! ! ! beyond me.

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Valsa George 20 June 2013

Even Coleridge himself will envy at this new pleasure dome decreed by Kubla Khan! ! What an artistic marvel you have erected in thin air with your wonderful words, Captain! This deserves well over 10

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Saadat Tahir 18 June 2013

a string of pearls from the pirates lost treasure chest, now lies strewn on the beech for all to savour :))

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Wahab Abdul 17 June 2013

this one is really great, i astounded when i read this poem..

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David Wood 17 June 2013

A wonderful use of the English language. A brilliant poem and a worthy 10.

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Shahzia Batool 16 June 2013

This is he reconstruction of the fabulous pleasure-dome after many centuries, certainly imagination knows no bounds or borders, Divine miracle, this power of conception is, indeed! While reading your poetry Coleridge often comes to my mind, not in this reference but regarding his difference of fancy, the primary and the secondary imagination, the active and the passive imagination what he has discussed in his criticism work...By reading your architectonics, i must say the great khan can cancel his own orders if he gets to know about it now; as a regular reader of your poems i can say you too have drunk the milk of paradise. this poem will go in my favorite poems' list.

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Unwritten Soul 15 June 2013

Speechless, amazing write, if i were one of the pirates, i shall proud that we did this...i love the words selection as much it flows as if your Benevolent ship moving free toward me_Soul

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