Monday, May 27, 2013

Odes, Ending Of An Age Comments

Rating: 5.0

In this the newfound pleasure that I share
writing odes to sun, sea and wind;
dark midnight bares
where stars in their black ocean swim
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Unwritten Soul 01 June 2013

Ahhh I fall in love with this write, just pure droplets shines from your ink to my eyes! _Soul

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Wahab Abdul 29 May 2013

wow, i love the poem for flow and your use of language flourished here like a flower....love it..10

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Shahzia Batool 27 May 2013

My favorite lines and images: where stars in their black ocean swim // and give their light to me regardless of my caste or place.// remind me of the battles I have won relive the youthful passions of the young rejoice in me unburdening my cares.// Can newfound thoughts redeem what ails me with the true mind of alchemy? If life is but a dream what clever newness to each scene that sets the stage the curtain raised, the curtain falls the ending of an age?

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